Poem about a girl can somebody help me finish this

I can barely focus when she plays with her hair

Why oh why in’t this fair

Honestly I don’t care

 

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Sa339593

About all the million unwelcome stares

They say you are such a scare

But they've not seen the gentleness there

Only I see it, only I care

 

I keep wishing you'd notice me, turn around for us only to talk to me

Hold my hand and make it all go away, just us against the world, let it be

The butterflies, never fading, the moonlight, always beaming, and you, filling me with glee

I long for you to notice, for you to realize that I'm here, I love you. but you don't know, with you I would be free.

 

(hope this helps...came from the heart: master of unrequited love ; )

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