Please Miss Christine?

Open your eyes, she needs someone!

From her eyes tears run

She tries to smile

At least for a while

She once knew fun

 

Where is the sun

The darkness has come

Its been the path for miles

Open your eyes, she needs someone

 

When I first saw the scars I was stunned

Does her dad know and her mum?

Their carelessness reflects in her profile

From her eyes flows the Nile

From her skin, warm blood runs

Open your eyes, she needs someone

 

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