Pitter-Patter

I think, I just may feel love

When I see you my heart implodes

My heart flutters as you walk in

It’s wings spread and you accept it gently

It perches on your shoulder and sings it’s tune of love

You look around but I hide

I can’t let you know it’s me

As rain thunders the bird of my heart fly’s back

You chase it, attempting to find

. . . Me

I can’t, what to say I wouldn’t know

I quickly hold my hands out as it flutters back into me

Only then do I hear another chirp

It perches on my shoulder and sings a tune of love

It doesn’t fly far before my eyes land on you

The owner of my heart

Suddenly our birds fly out, entwining and playing

Your lovely smile on play as I feel my sight begin to blur, only seeing you

The drops of rain pitter as you extend a hand and dance we do

Once left, then right, forward, backwards, fireworks on play

Our bodies drenched but our hearts united

The water though refreshing does nothing to our fiery hearts

Our hearts ablaze as we dance through the stone steps, hearing the pitter-patter play it’s part

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

MT inside

This is absolutely beautiful, well done!! I want to give you feedback but I think it's unnecessary, keep up the good work!

Adventure_cat

Ha! Way to make someone blush! Lol, thanks for the compliment!!

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