A Perfect World
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I sit at night, watching the stars
Dreaming of a world without scars
No hate or frears
No war or tears
A world where no one lies
A world where no one dies
A perfect world to say the least
Where laughter will never cease
All of us a family, sharing a home
Caring and loving in a place to roam
No bleeding or sickness
Just beauty and fairness
Yes, a world where love we would feel
How I wish a world like that could be real
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willcam
Nice! I really like this! And yes, a utopia would be great. Especially a place where no one was unhappy. And everyone worked together. I love the rhythm of this poem. Great work!
Kayla10cat
Simple, nice, great poem!
oliviagavilan
simple and elegant, but I don't feel that you touched the emotion of the poem. I didn't really connect. The imagery is nice, but the emotion isn't quite there.