Paige

Fri, 07/31/2020 - 18:51 -- Yanka

Roses are red 

My eyes are too. 

You barely see the tears I cry 

And I can't speak my truth 

 

I hide my scars 

Or blame then on freak accidents 

'You are the definition of beauty 

I'm just picking the thorns' he says 

 

'I'm just moulding you into a perfect version of you,

Removing the attitude will do you some good' 

Taking away my freedom and making me live with guilt 

You made me believe that I deserved to be treated like I'm no good 

 

A beautiful rose, trampled on and covered with blood 

A beautiful soul that now believes that pain is love. 

That these tears will feed my beauty 

And his hand will define my beauty.

Comments

sun889

Maybe that's a problem ... that you can't tell the truth or speak ... What if he didn't say yes you were good? Pain is not love and incommunication is not.Do not cry, manifest yourself.

Yanka

 it’s not  neccessarily that I cannot tell the truth or speak out.

rather thousands of women go out of their way to feel wanted and desired, 

They go through all sorts of abuse either physical or emotional... 

every woman desires to be loved, some even mistaken love for pain as you mentioned 

This poem is ought to shed a little bit of light to such women 

maybe even me 

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