out of nowhere

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

out of nowhere
i rise
my punch lines to divide stands of sanity
it won't take much longer until people are imprison with insanity
and locked up in a looney bin with bin laden
or saddan husseim
who is sane this day in age
it seems to get lost and covered
on the daily dreaded breath
taking formality on battled ongoing stages
it's hard to maintain a poise position
point of view to only points to you

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Comments

Reinanena

Short and sweet but to the point...We continue to live on edge, question is when will we be able to live a comfortable life without feeling like we're walking on pins and needles...Praying this world changes and realizes that coming together everyday is all we have to continue living this beautiful life that God has given to all of us..Great Job!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this poem i wanted to make it short, but direct
this is something we need to be aware of as individuals living in a hostile society
this is a beautiful world, its the ppl living in it
thank u 4 showing luv and support

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