others might know mebut not

Wed, 09/25/2013 - 15:46 -- xione7

others might know me

but not as well as you

others might show me

yet i only see you

others might try drugs

others unhealthy foods

my addiction is a powerful drug

these hugs and kisses from you.

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xione7

11 years ago

i would apreciate some feed back. constructive critiscism is welcomed but do not be mean about it. 

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