onion..........AND THE WAR

He strips 
He strips me naked 
Strips my filmy pink 
Strips me in the daylight 
Strips my skin 
And cut
Into two 
Three 
Four 
5
6
And wipe the tears 
Knife sharpened the tongue.
And thus the war begins..

©josesarang

 

This poem is about: 
My community
My country
Our world

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