One verse of love

People don't see anything wrong      While in a relationship     But i've seen over the years     What a real relationship is         I've seen friends suffer       Or trapped in a relationship        From my experience I can tell you          What a unhealthy and healthy relationship is           And not the one you need to go exercise          So you can be healthy again           But the ones that you create a bond with someone         Where you see each other in the future as old people         With four kids         Even the relationship that are friendship             That are from your childhood             Playing in dirty making mud pies         And grow up to see each other succeed            Help each other out when one us are down           It's not love when they tie you down           telling you that they will kill themselves         If you leave them           It's not love if they blackmail you with the mistakes          You have made and regret          When it’s  love          There’s no regret           When you guys are together            Everything just starts to lights up              You feel someone alway will have your back             And could fall into their arms           

This poem is about: 
My family

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Veronica_0829

It's my first one to show people please help me get better!

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