Oasis Man

Fri, 05/24/2013 - 21:47 -- Adeline


United States
40° 50' 17.7072" N, 73° 51' 23.7924" W

Let me breathe, give me life, help me put away my strife. Take my hand and nourish me, keep me from digging too deep. Oasis man give me your life, your love and help me end this fight. This heat is over-coming me, making it hard for me to see, with vision blurred and body numb, it's time for you to beat your drum. Renew my lungs, my heart, my mind, my soul and everything I've tried. This moment given from above, this Oasis in the man I love, is meant to change my very life, is meant to help me live untied, undone and free. Maybe soon I can finally breathe.


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