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i saw you in a crowed room 
all i wanted was you
nobody else in the room mattered
i saw your face 
i melted inside 
 
i want  to say something
i wish i could
your still to friagle 
still broken 
still hurt
 
i want to mend your broken heart
all i want is you
nobody else matters 
but you do 
 
 
 
This poem is about: 
Me

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