No Risky Venture

Mon, 02/17/2014 - 00:04 -- Bship43
Baby I cannot explain
This amazing feeling
Except that it's not plain 
My head is through the ceiling
When I see your face 
Cant help but smile
And feel your embrace
Please stay a while!
As I hold you close
Keep me in your heart
Beating Red like a rose
This is just the start
To an amazing adventure
With an amazing person!
This is no risky venture.
This feeling will just worsen
The more I am with you.
I want to be with you,
Say you you want me too.
All I want is YOU!! 
 

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