never know you like i do

Thu, 10/24/2013 - 10:54 -- xione7

even though our bonds are broken

on eachother we used to depend

all this time we invested

i know i have been bested

but can you tell me one thing

before the tears flood like a spring

do you even know him

have you even met him

does he even care for you

can it really be true

are we really through

i wish you the best 

in your trials and tests

if your mind is set

well then you can bet

im not with you

but he'll never know you like i do

Comments

xione7

i honestly spoke from my heart

doesnt matter if it reads smart

i said what i meant

its the message i wanted to send

if the rythym is off

its cuz my heart is closed off

some feed back is great

maybe some debate

but still i think its true

he'll never know her like i do

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