NaCl

Written for review

For those who

Follow lies drawn

Out of the blue

I cherish you

 

Black hair greased

Defeated behind barrows

Wheeling the rounds

Tripping on hills

 

Mounds pile on pillars

Salt statues decay

Written for review

All eventually fades.

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