my world

As you walk in my museum you can see that my mom is the most important person to me she been there from day one when my father was not.my mom is my world sometimes my mom would get on my nerves to the point i wanna say i hate you, but than again i cant because she puts clothes in my back shoes on my feet and food on the table. i love my mom! i would ask my mom something before i would ask my dad cause my dad don't do anything for me. he dose it after my mom has to yell and scream and stress over one thing i asked him to get me. instead of him taking his place in life and being there and taking responsibly for me and what he created and being a dad he acts like he has nothing to worry about. that's why i love my mother she is there 24-7 everyday. that's why kids has to stop and think when they are disrespectful to there mom. cause she could of been a drug attic and and don't give a shit about me but she dose that's why she is my world!

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grlaqm

Very good piece Kyana. Loved how you expressed your feelings about your father. :)

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