My Passion


19411 Spanish Needle
United States
29° 48' 21.2256" N, 95° 42' 36.1836" W

She was a worker from Primerica

The best company in America

Studies her way out to be a doctor

By the watchful eye of her brother, the protector

Being middle class she knows it will be hard

So in spending money she will always be on guard

It will be easy as she has no sense of style

Just the thought of shopping will get her to run a mile

She loves to take care of baby’s

And she will like to have four kids, maybe

She really loves history books

That anything in the stove will overcook

Because of her life she has a shy personality

She has develop a strong mentality

Her moral character is of being compassionate

Becoming a doctor is why she’s so passionate

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well said

very sincere

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