my love for you

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my heart shines when you're here 
then it dies when you leave 
i shed a tear here and there
but to others i just grieve
they say love is blind 
but they don't know our love is kind.
but one day it turns upside down 
and you leave me to rot in the ground. 
you come back at 2:00 in the a.m 
i wake up to see you drunk
i say whats wrong with you and you tell me "go back to sleep you punk".
i ask you again but this time say who the hell are you calling a punk!
you choke me to death and say im talking to you, you piece of junk.
i  look you in the eyes and say who are you your such a absorbed person?
you grab a knife and say no babe I've just worsen.
You killed me with love and hate
but you just didn't realize that you just made your own designated fate.
I'm in heaven now looking at your mistakes 
and every single time you kill someone i say you're the reason why i love to hate.
 

Comments

Centia

Your feeling are deep. Niice rhyme.

:)

zakiya.griffin

awww thaaanks! :)

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