My Love untold (the secret love )

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She held my heart from the beginning when we ended it was just the beginning and she kept a hold on my heart without trying ...she's gotten me smitten...I want her and I to be together like a pair of mittens in the winter she's my true love I need no "deal ripper"...time to get real so she can know the deal I'll drop it on her like the bass I don't need no rhythm...similes and metaphors she's got my heart caught up in flames as her friend ship douses it like a steady flowing river...I love u so much just seeing u makes my insides shiver... ¿Puedo invitarte a una bebida? That's have we meet before ...cuz this I've seen in my dreams...at night I think about u just remember tho everything is not what it seems...you make tear drops fall from my eyes like rivers when I see u cry inside...I hold u close to my heart with a loving tight embrace as I try to just act as a friend before your face...I let u slip a way more times than I can remember...then again what can I remember...senior year 2013 ...I wanna be so close to u that to! separate us first they gotta tear apart the seam...night my love Buenos noches... oh and have some sweet dreams...

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