My Last Dare

I once dared my heart to fall in love,

So it stopped beating.

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tardisfanatic

9 years ago

This poem is short but it also shows so much feeling. I love it.

far2lost

9 years ago

Thank you so much! Thank you for apprecitaing it.

Realityy_365

9 years ago

There is so much said here, in so few words! Great point! My experience is that love sucks, by the way. lol Stay away from love, until it voluntarily finds you.

far2lost

9 years ago

Thank you! We've had similar experiences then haha Thanks for the advice, although it's an incredibly hard task to achieve. I'll try my best and you do the same.

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