My First Heartbreak

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30331
United States
33° 41' 54.834" N, 84° 32' 35.4732" W

Only 8 years old, when you left me here.
Remembering when you held me dear
Comforting me when I cried
Telling me jokes, when I sighed

The day you left, I can still remember
That I wished you stayed until December
When you gave me the best Christmas ever
Of course, that wouldn’t make my day better

I came back from the y & got the news.
Walked in the house and everyone was blue
I started to cry and she wasn’t there
To wipe the tears away from the fear.

My heart still heals.
I am still in pain
My heart is now sealed.
My tears feel when it rained

I love you! I Miss you!
You will always be mine!
Goodbye, nana! I’ll see you in the sky.

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