My feet hurt


My feet hurt.

I don't say it, but my feet hurt.

the rubble around me is piercing my skin.

My mother is crying.

My father is missing.

My dog is sleeping.

My Best Friend is swimming.

He's been swimming for a while now.

His mom is crying.

I wonder what happened?

My feet hurt.


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