My Crimson Tears

Thu, 06/20/2013 - 17:32 -- caela95

siting all alone
surrounded by darkness
helplessness screams inside me
tears role down my snowy cheeks
my best friend lies next to me cold as steal
razor edges slice lyk butter
crimson tears flow out my saphire cords twining around my snowy plains
weaving patterns of sorrow and fear
wimpering sobs excape my lips
my worst fear i have faced
this time is my death
as my life falls to the floor
my sobs weaken
i grow limp
i wish of my eternal slumber to claim me 
but it never does
a shadow washes over my sences 
to wake isolated and alone 
in my river of crimson tears
my best friend by me always
this time i succeed
lashing across my saphire cords
my crimson tears flow faster 
pouring from both founts
my vision fades
as my sobs barely escape my quivering lips 
never to return again
claimed by clarity 
my eternal slumber swoops over me
soaked in my crimson tears

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