Mutual Storm

You looked at me with an intensity that took my breath away, and I became transfixed by the hopeless need and possessive protection storming through your eyes. I knew then that I could never leave you. You see, I caught a glimpse of the storm raging in my own eyes as I marveled at the beauty of yours.

This poem is about: 
Me

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Jules_FireGirl2.0

Absolutely beautiful in a way I can't describe. All I know is that this is how I feel about a certain person in my life. Thank you for this masterpiece. 

Jules_FireGirl2.0

Absolutely beautiful in a way I can't describe. All I know is that this is how I feel about a certain person in my life. Thank you for this masterpiece. 

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