Moonlight

Location

60644
United States
41° 52' 58.1844" N, 87° 45' 6.228" W

Here we go baby on this lonely quest of hoping with belief that you see me for who I truly am like a glowing gem. And I see you at night your eyes sparkle like the stars in the moonlight cause your beautiful and smart. You already have my heart.

I like it when you sing and looking for me your like a better dream that I have when i'm sleeping like a hero I watch out for you its amazing to be here with you cause your my moonlight.

Have you ever met someone so true and special like a heart felt blessing. We stay together like a loving couple with our style and grace not to hate. Just look to the sky's such a beautiful sight and it feels so right. Its so glorious and bright cause your moonlight.

Comments

Eunoia

first, suggestion reformat it, seperate into stanza and lines.

Q: are you trying to rhyme? You might want to check through it because it isn't consitant what's your purpose behind writing this poem?

You have some beautiful language here, that's thumbs up it.

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