mom

i went to this party mom i remembered what u said you told me not to drink so i drank soad instead i know i did right thing mom i know your always right the pary is ending mom as everyone drove out of sight as i got in my car mom i knew i'd get home cause the way you made me feel mom so responsble so sweet i started to drive away mom as i pulled into the road the other guy didn't see me mom and hit me like load i lay there on the pavement mom i hear the policeman say the other guy was drunk mom now i am the one to pay i am lying hear dying mom i wish you'd get here soon how come this happened to me mom my life bursted like a balloon he din't know where e was going mom he was probably at the same party as i there is one big difference though mom he's going to live i die why do people drink mom it can ruin your whole life i'm feeling sharp pains mom just like a burning knife the man who hit me mom is walking, it's not fair i'm lying hear dying mom while all he does is stare tell my brother not to cry mom tell dad to be brave soon i will be in heaven mom someone should have told him mom not to drink and drive if they'd often take the time mom i'd still be alive my breath is growing short mom i'm becoming very scared please dont cry for me mom cause when i need you, you were there i have one last qestion mom before i say "good bye" i dint even drink mom so why am i the one to die this is the end mom i wish i could look you in the eyes to say these final words mom i love you and good bye

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