Milkshake

Thu, 09/18/2014 - 02:09 -- AdrianW

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In our finite moments of happiness
I stare into your eyes as I float in space
So many stars, so many memories
This is our life together
By the pull of gravity our hearts encircle
The taste of this dessert
Your hand's beyond reach 
Yet the pull of gravity brings me closer
By the pull of your eyes, I see no other
With this ring, we create our own world
Prepared to make more stars
Prepared to enjoy the sweetness of life
Our hearts apply the seal
Forever encircled
Forever together

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