The Mask

Sun, 06/23/2013 - 22:57 -- mbd11c

Behind this mask I am free

No chains or lies shall hold to me

Judgement shall not recall my name

Nor will I be of other's game. 

You cannot make me fear your hate

Your lies, your pain, your change of taste

I will not be beneath your will

Nor will I ever remain still.

I move like shadows beneath your feet

I live as death and life and cheat

Never will you find my heart

Never can you tear me apart

For I am free here in the dark.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

ever heard the expression there is light at the end of the tunnel

you are free wherever-in the dark or light

this poem gives the reader the impression that you were at one point imprison within yourself

this could be the beginning of writing amazign poems

keep writing

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