Lover that changed your outlook

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 22:14 -- armara


United States
33° 51' 50.634" N, 118° 10' 35.8644" W

(Ever since our first real love we all learn to keep our hearts in box with chains and locks so no one can damage what has already been broken its not your faut theres a barrier you always ask your self why are you scared of him or her getting to close a new chance is deserved your too stuck on pain and rain, lost and no gain, you feel like your inhumane you do not what your whole life to be ruin due to the first love that flew away like a dove and never returned to its owner now you are one lost teared loaner only you can mend your heart so take it slow keep a hold on sanity express your emotions to a friend to keep from insanity do not hold in that is why you have friends)

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very touching
felt each word of what was said
however, use the idea and create it in a different format
to some viewers, its an essay
recreate this idea in the form of stanza

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