Love

Location

90011
United States
34° 0' 28.4004" N, 118° 15' 30.636" W

Love,
It is very tough.
Like a fall,
It will leave a scar.
Like extacy,
It is a drug, almost exactly.
Like a vending machine,
Will spent on her, but will still be a lovely queen.
Like a hair split,
Almost can't prevent it.
Fall in love once,
Chances are you become dunce.
Blinded and guided by the heart,
You soon think it's art.
But if you succeed,
Your heart will not bleed.
You will be happy,
Even with acne.
True love is rare,
Can't find it as simple as air.
Love,
It is very tough.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very interesting in provding your own perspective of love

love is not just a word

its feelings, joy, emotions, etc................

when you have love, you'll feel it

 

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