Long Day

Wed, 11/05/2014 - 20:15 -- Aceharb

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She said long day as she walked on by

I said what a good way to say goodnight
She believes if things, will work out 
Well be happy all threw our
 
Our Miserable lives
( we'll ).. Skip over our lies
( and ).. Cover our eyes
As.. Our souls.. Die....
 
 
He said I can't live this way
I Won't do it another day
It's bad to see us go our separate ways
But it had to happen rather than live this way
This miserable life
( and ) skip over the lies
( we'll ) cover our eyes
Our souls won't die
 
She said I love you baby don't go
She said i need you and I know you know
He said I love you and Baby I'll try
And Theres nothing that can make me say goodbye
 
That's love and how the story goes
Married each other over 60 years ago
Threw the struggles they made it all the way
They died together on this very day
 
She had a long day as she stood by
I said from heaven our last good bye
As a tear drop ran down her pretty face
She kneeled down and took her place.

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