Living Tears

Its flowing faster than my cyclic heart beats

It's roaring louder than superbowl fans

Its X-raying my heart

It's exerted pressure is increasing in magnitude

It tastes bitter

Its an accumulation of my living tears.



One word...deep. In just a few lines you give the reader a sense of agony when we all cry "living tears". Its amazing how you took something like crying to a entirely different level of meaning and feeling. This poem is completely relatable, deep, and amazing. God bless and keep writing on my friend(:!!!


Thank you so much!


This poem just shows the emotions when we cry. I felt every word you said I can relate with your words because that's  how I feel when I cry. It was short but the message was inormouse. I woild love to read more of your poetry so keep on writing amazing poetry

check out my poetry and hopefully it inspire you and others

keep up the good work 


*smiles* Thanks and I will!

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