Living Tears
Its flowing faster than my cyclic heart beats
It's roaring louder than superbowl fans
Its X-raying my heart
It's exerted pressure is increasing in magnitude
It tastes bitter
Its an accumulation of my living tears.
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One word...deep. In just a few lines you give the reader a sense of agony when we all cry "living tears". Its amazing how you took something like crying to a entirely different level of meaning and feeling. This poem is completely relatable, deep, and amazing. God bless and keep writing on my friend(:!!!
This poem just shows the emotions when we cry. I felt every word you said I can relate with your words because that's how I feel when I cry. It was short but the message was inormouse. I woild love to read more of your poetry so keep on writing amazing poetry
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keep up the good work