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I am completely oblivious

To all things both vital and frivolous.

 

Why can’t we just turn a new leaf

To save us from unnecessary sighs and grief.

 

Why can’t you just slow down a bit,

As not to make me look so dimly lit.

 

Your kindness is pitiless,

Your smiles render me faithless.

 

Toward all people I will ever meet

I shall never excel beyond a greet.

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