LiqCRUEL

Alcohol,why is it legal?

it makes me sick

the substance we nicknamed liq

while drinking, you can kill many brain cells

if you drink too much you may be greeted by an angel

the day after is even worse, if there is one

you're living but you feel to the point you wish you were gone

"Liquor is better for you than marijuana and pyschedelics"

this is a lie

i can show you the amount of deaths each have contributed on a chart of pie

alcohol is the outlier, cant you see

it is a legal form of poison that the man is trying to feed me

Comments

intenselyashlynn

this was amazing okay, it's so uplifting and dead on about the topic. I love it.

BuzyBeeks

gracias intenselyashlynn

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