Limbo is all

I don’t know what you see

But I see nothing

A hollow mirror

A darkened view

A shallow existence

That’s all I see

You can try all you want

To make me whole

To make me see

But these eyes are shut

Never to be opened

But maybe near the end

When it’s all closed and less

I’ll try to fend

 

 

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