Light Like Snow

Mon, 12/30/2013 - 23:44 -- Dawn8

Overwhelming light like snow

Fluttering in spirals around me

Impossible to explain or even know

Yet it is all that I see

 

Beautiful flowers of promise seem to grow

So I rest in silence and take a knee

Numb to the noise, scrapping the show

Complete surrender may be the key

 

Surrender, but don’t go with the flow

Now, I suppress the urge to flee

It takes a leap of faith to go

I am capable, I am free

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