The Light of Dreams vs. The Darkness of Reality

I see the endless ocean

I hear the crash of waves

I smell the perfume of tropical flowers

I feel the splash of water on skin

 

I see the stifling darkness

I hear the shattering of something thrown

I smell the odour of bitterness and anger

I feel the tears as they begin to fall

 

I see the light behind closed eyelids

I hear the rythym of my heartbeat

I smell the salt on the sea breeze

I feel the sand between my toes

 

To escape what is real, I take refuge in what is not

Comments

Maaliksmom

Love it! Love the way with your use of detail I can envision your words.

jeter_amanda

Thank you so much for the positive feedback! :)

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