life without you...

i dont know what i'd do without you
i'd feel like i astroide drifting off into space
never changing direction
never changing speed
i'd be going into a downward spiral
but i have you
you're here with me
i never have to feel blue
now im onto a smiling spree
im glad i found you
i feel happy
and that should be bad

Comments

lsnyd91200

shouldnt* be bad, first time give me some slack

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