life in death

Location

75077
United States
33° 5' 12.3792" N, 97° 3' 57.5208" W

Death death closes in,
shadows get darker,
my life is filled with confusion,
when I’m waiting for you,
my family has turned upside down,
I can’t do anything with you gone,
The sun no longer shines bright for me,
what do you do when you feel this pain,
my whole life was circled around hurt
and now, since your gone I feel nothing,
as love turns to family and love turns to sadness,
you were the life I needed when I went to die
the time it took to explore the sadness,
but now since your gone,
my life has completely changed,
when your gone my life sill moves on,
and finally now I know,
even though your not here with me,
I still must move on when you’re gone.

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