Let me know you're

Let me know you're still awake 

while sleep deprived and arms shake 

dream every little last mistake 

into the mist until they're fake

And when you start to think of me

remember your intirity 

the universe around you so

extensive impossibly so

but don't we know of all alive

the way to really get inside

for ignorance isn't peace

But where the sence begins to sece

our fourth demention blinds us so

we really have no place to go

a state of mind , the only key

but earthly things are tied to me

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