last breath

Location

Brazil
950 north
United States
39° 36' 48.9636" N, 87° 38' 16.1268" W

you didnt even see her pain

her tears 

well they fell like the rain 

she lives in fear 

her feelings were like a hurricane

 

she knew her family would carry through

not caring for her death

looking up at the blue 

she took her last breath 

and then she finally knew 

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
Our world

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