Just a second in my mind

Sun, 05/26/2013 - 20:52 -- k_l4610

Location

96749
United States
19° 36' 19.0908" N, 155° 1' 28.4988" W

Can’t sleep cause I keep thinking

Every moment that passes is weakening

I keep wondering, keep sinking

So blind with emotion

I can’t see a damn thing

Now I'm left alone wondering why

What did I do to make you say goodbye

I promise all I wanted was to make you fly

And I’m left again hanging high and dry

But when I fall it will be subliminal

Like Alice in Wonderland

This feeling should be criminal

So big it just might be biblical

But it hurts so much they say I’m critical

So put aside those feelings you hide

I’m not asking to be your bride

I just want to be someone you confide

Someone you dance along side

To this song of life, one stride

So many words unspoken

You’re more than just a token

I understand you think you’re broken

But baby you've been chosen

And I’ll take all those pieces and mold them

I’ll even go get the ones they have stolen

Together we'll navigate a shark filled ocean

But we won’t care because we drank that love drunk potion

So here is my proposition

I want you as my addition

As long as I have permission

Baby you'll be my mission

I’m following intuition

Together we'll greet the mortician

Let’s go on this expedition

We got enough ammunition

No such thing as opposition

Were bigger than nuclear fission

, I have a few conditions,

A price for admission

Don’t be worried it’s not a lot

I assure you’re not taking a long shot

In fact it’s the size of a polka dot

I’ve given it lots of thought

So no need get distraught

Promise me no games

I’ll just burn up in flames

I want to be your claim

I want to be the only name

Promise you won’t place the blame

And I wont do the same

Let cupid aim, I’ll take the maim

I guess the question is the same

I’m giving you the reins

Listen to what’s pumping through your veins

And tell me what remains?

When you figure it out

Give me a shout

I’ll be around no doubt

If it turns out you want to check out

That’s ok I wont pout

But if my luck pulls through

And you feel just as much as I do

Then all that’s left is me and you

I that’s how I want it to!

Comments

k_l4610

This poem is about the first night that my sweetheart and I had a huge fight over something ridiculous. I wrote this is a way to get frustrations off my back.

kapohochk808

Sounds like my life story. exactly

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