January Day

I can't distinguish my anger from the tearsBut still I wish you were hereThey say you never know what you had till its goneBut I've missed you for so long I've missed you for so long That January day will never fade awayThe feeling I felt when theCancer took you way The snow falling on my tear filed eyesWaiting for you to come back to life Never thought that moment would be your lastNever thought that January day would pass I just can't live with all my night mares and fearsThese have been the longest 2 yearsThey say you never know what you had till its goneBut God always takes the young God always takes the young That January day will never fade awayThe feeling I felt when theCancer tool you way The snow falling on my tear filed eyesWaiting for you to come back to life Never thought that moment would be your lastNever thought that January day would pass I can still hear your laugh in the back of my mindIt brakes through the sound of me crying  I can still feel your touch in the palm of my handIt makes me look down at my blue wrist band  I can still hear your laugh in the back of my mindIt brakes through the sound of me crying  I can still feel your touch in the palm of my handIt makes me look down at my blue wrist band  That January day will never fade awayThe feeling I felt when theCancer tool you way The snow falling on my tear filed eyesWaiting for you to come back to life Never thought that moment would be your lastNever thought that January day would pass That January dayThat took you away               

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KupKate95

This was beautiful. I'm so sorry to hear what happened. I can't help but think of a breakup. I know this is about death, but I can relate due to a bad breakup. This is amazing. Good job.

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