IT'S AMAZING!

It's amazing!
One younger loves onother younger
Everyone loves one onother everyday
But others hate their doz in love

It's amazing!
Before to fall in, he was there
But he was not able to feel her
Being mad after, deep not thoughts

It's amazing!
Days continue to fall down
Dream of love now developed
Deep in, feel her , now one's will

It's amazing!
Then others became face black ash.
To have group of teenagers is good
High slop in words so very bad

It's amazing!
Love feeling developed
In other's heart full of hatred
Hate them in love becomes his plan

It's amazing!
Decision of love was made
To live together is their wish
In other's being a time to anger

It's amazing
Day came he called one's lover girl
Listen, last days we were friends
Today that boy led you to hate me

It's amazing
Second he called boy too
You know how I loved her before?!
But no matter ,continue to love

It's amazing!
Even you love her
Let me have long time to converse with her
If you see, don't sad.

It's amazing!
Lover boy came to his girlfriend
You know if I see you
With him in long time to converse 'hu'

It's amazing!
I will have anger
He narrated whole story from enemy
Girl loughed loudly to accept them

It's amazing!
To love that boy
Also is difficult because others want him
But she defeated all, but after!

It's amazing!
Sounds, so many in groups
Some said she was mistaken
Other told boy she lied him

It's amazing!
The anger of boy near by them
He took anger to her too
But she explained all to him

It's amazing!
They sought advices from many
They told them to close their ears
For not listening to what they said about them

It's amazing!
To see them continuing to love
Data to day sat together
Time to time ate together, so good

It's amazing!
Time came, things bad
Boy heard bad news
To stop him to love is other's target

It's amazing!
Day came they defeated
Now, their will is to be in Joy of love
To look them today in love,

It's amazing!

By Thierry MURAGIJIMANA
On the 26th September 2016

This poem is about: 
Me

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