It'll ruin you

Mon, 08/13/2012 - 00:52 -- Ana220

I know ive made mistakes,wishin i could go back
But i know i cant
And tht frightens me, of waht might come of the future
Knowing i mightve just ruined my life
To think tht one little mistake
One thing done wrong, might leave you more despare than you couldve imagined
One thing done wrong, could take possibly everything you love away from you
One thing done wrong, could make you fall on your knees begging for forgiveness
Yes, we all make mistakes
But some mistakes might just ruin you

Comments

jwiener

This is a great poem, which sends a very powerful message that we should all be aware of the choices we make in life, because certain choices can have consequences. Your repetition of "one" throughout the poem really emphasizes how only a simple mistake can change the course of our lives. You are a great writer! Keep it up!

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