Insomnia

Here I am at dreams gate

Slowly sliding inside

The place where I trash my tainted thoughts 

While I tried to hide

I tried to run 

But my shoelaces were undone 

They sank their teeth in 

I guess I'm here for the evening

 

I can only see so many ghosts

Before I go blind

I want the look on your face

To be the last thing I see as I say Goodbye

I don't even know if I'm right. 

I'm just a creature of fright.

 

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well said

continue to write

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