The Inner Battle

Wed, 07/03/2013 - 19:12 -- Jorge

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Magnificent is our existence, and eternal is our light We may sing and dance forever in our inherited Evergreen Might. Violently impeded by an inner night,  against doubt, greed, and pride we will put up a fight. With all you ever knew, remember what is created, the love within us, ancient but new. Gratitude for this magnificent light! The sunrise and its paradistical view. Victory against the violence of the night! No more hidden colors shadowed by societies discrimination and fright. Forever patient, optimistic and kind, Our inner light is waiting for its beauty to be mined. It is true Magnificent is our existence, but paradise remains hidden by the insecurity of our mind.

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Charity22

Great Poem!

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