Improving Communications Failed

Sat, 04/19/2014 - 10:28 -- ninaz


Grunts were communications in the beginning.

Animals haven't changed their way of communicating through chirps, barks, meows and squeals.

Their communications contain a musical quality.

Tools were developed over time for humans to better communicate.

Cell phones, Internet, radio, television.

More is now complicated.

These communications do not help humans eat, love, or enjoy life.

Animals still survive without complexity in communications.

The only advancement in communications I enjoy is music.

It is in the verbose of instruments, animals, vibrations and touches the soul.




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