Immortality

Because I am a writer

You will never die

My love, you'll last forever

Within each line you'll lie

I'll paint all of your features

With my unforgiving words

To me, your imperfections

Deserve poetic verse

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8 years ago

I LOVE THIS!!

8 years ago

Thank you DeMaree, it means a lot to me that you thought so much of my poem that you left a comment. :)

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