I'll Keep My Eyes Fixed On the Sun

Mon, 03/24/2014 - 20:51 -- elisepn

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Eyes cast down, fixed upon the ground

Taste the blood, broken dreams, lonely times indeed

Broken soun, softly layig on the ground

 

You knw I took the long way around

I laid my cards down and your sunshine made me feel

Eyes cast down, fixed upon the ground

 

You knew I wouldn't come around

But still you left my faded notion alone and meek

Broken sound, softly laying on the ground

 

You thought that I never would

I got myself back on my own two feet

Eyes cast down, fixed upon the ground

 

Way down below I was found

Now the blazing sun is all I can see

Broken sound, softly laying on the ground

 

I'm no longer a broken sound

I have taught myself never to keep

Eyes cast down, fixed upon the ground

Broken sound, softly laying on the ground

 

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