If You Ever Miss Me

if you ever miss me

and hesitate if you should call

to tell me or not...

just whisper it to the wind

and let it carry your words on...

maybe i'll be able to feel the coldness of your heart then

and not the warmth of your lies

 

Comments

Nate’s_the_name25

5 years ago

I really liked where the poem was going and the it just stopped; I really think that you should spend more time on this one and add to it :)

jennyvahchuama

5 years ago

Thank you so much for the feedback! I will definitely finish soon! ❤️

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